Thursday, October 28, 2010

ek chhoti si love story...

Ye kahani hai do dosto ki….ye kahani hai ek confuse ladki ki jise ye pata hi nahi ki wo kisse pyar karti hai.


Ab aap soch rahe honge ki main ye kya keh raha hu… to dosto….ye hakikat hai is kahani ki shuruwat ek ladki se hoti hai….diya…. jo ki school me padhti hai..ek ladka roz use school jate aur laut te hue dekhta hai…us ladke ka naam vivek hai….



ek din vivek ne diya ko propose kiya aur diya ne kaha ki usne is bare me kabhi socha nahi hai…fir v vivek try karta raha..karta raha…

finally ek din diya ne vivek ko ha keh diya aur  fir shuruwat hui unki prem kahani ki….aur yaha se suru hoti hai AJAB PREM KI GAJAB KAHANI..

ye baat 2004 k kareeb ki rahi hogi….vivek apna engg khatam karke masters k liye IIM-Kolata join karta hai aur diya medical ki taiyaari karti hai…vivek ka MBA complete ho jata hai aur diya ka medical me admission ka sapna toot jata hai…aisi haalat me vivek diya ko sambhalta hai aur use guide karta hai….

diya degree college me admission le leti hai aur dono apne apne life me busy ho jate hain…..
2010 ki baat hai ek din diya ki life me uske ek class mate ki entry hoti hai…MADDY yehi naam uske is class mate ko suit karega kyuki sach me pagal tha wo……usne diya se baat karna suru kiya aur diya aur uski dosti gehri hoti chali gayi ..


ek din diya ne maddy se vivek k bare me bataya aur sath me ye v bataya ki aaj kal vivek nasha karne laga hai kyuki use lagta hai ki main use time nahi de pa rahi hu.












Dosto ab aage ki kahani likhne me please meri madad kare……I need a climax for this story..help me

10 comments:

  1. cant say anything........................
    pretty confusing..............

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  2. @ neha-yep i know its confusing that's why i was expecting some gud suggestions as well as climax from my friends.....
    :-(
    anyways agar koi climax dimaag me aaye to do suggest me.

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  3. yar it is a smail story bt ya itna samjh me aata hai ki phela pyar kabhi bhulaya nahi ja sakta yar phela pyar sacha hota hai.....

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  4. @neha- sahi kaha pehla pyaar hi sachha hota hai....maddy to fokat me hi begani shadi me abdulla deewana ban raha tha right??

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  7. sab se pahle forever alone whi rahta hai jishka story es story se match karta hai ....muje khai - khai tum dhik hahe te is it so,
    really great storrry.
    this is perfect endding......

    love me to break up hona hi nahi chahiye.---
    i respect maddy's emotion & who guided Diya and finally made her realize and comfortable for vivek so taht she should nt feel guilty for Maddy(him)as she was going to leave hin. good enddind..bcoz maddy has potential.........

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  8. Maddy is a nice guy.He really true love with Diya dats y he taken gud decision abt diya.Maddy char iz more attractive than vivek...starting of story is very simple nd original.In my opinion u sud work on maddy char more...so u can put d climax.
    one 1 more thing u can add some good talks between d character....well ur presentation is nice ..for further best of luck.

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  9. @ ankur-thnx bro( its first comment from MAHARAJ FAMILY)

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